Polaroid business system update.

I've done some work on my Polaroid business system, and it's…well…different. The lines on the front and back of the business card line up on all four edges. My professor was saying that the lines on the letterhead were a little overpowering, so I faded them back, but I'm not sure that's quite the right solution. the envelope is mostly unchanged, but the type treatment of POLAROID for all three pieces has changed.

Questions: Is the business card too busy?
Does the type feel like it fits with the line design?
Do the faded lines on the letterhead work?


1 comment(s).:

March 2, 2010 at 3:26 AM micah said...

Yes, Yes, No.

Maybe if the lines on the letterhead are solid but don't span the entire length/width of the ltter?