Fact sheets updated.

When designing, a lot of important changes are made after group critiques. The designs at left were critiqued in class and by others, and I made changes to make the designs even better. A lot of subtle changes can make designs much nicer and cleaner. I think the layouts at right are superior to the ones at left, even though they make look the same at first glance.


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March 6, 2009 at 9:39 AM Timberati said...

It's like one of those "find the differences" things....I'm up to zero.

March 6, 2009 at 9:48 AM Lee said...

It's tricky. I ditched the indent (or outdent) on the two opening paragraphs. The large "the" has moved to a more logical position on all three layouts. The logo text is smaller and the logo now aligns with the right side of the body copy. The body copy all starts at even heights. For example, look on Zebra at the Harems paragraph. That headline sits above both columns of body copy instead of sharing a baseline with the second column. I also adjusted the margins and alignment of the opening paragraphs and "Did You Know" boxes in all three to be more even and spacious. And there are some other color and shape fixes. I'll let you hunt for those... :)